The melody of the reverie

Category: Writers Block

Post 1 by Sage Rose (the Zone BBS remains forever my home page) on Friday, 23-Feb-2007 0:55:35

Oh, the quiet hours
Asleep or awake
Musing over dreams and visions
Thoughts and ideas
Feeling the sun in my body
Feeling the cold in my veins
The door is closed
My eyes too
Over and over the melodies play in my head
It’s time to sing, this song is you
Dancing, laughing
And I stand alone, in a sweet reverie.

Post 2 by HauntedReverie (doing the bad mango) on Friday, 23-Feb-2007 5:44:25

sounds like something I'd write. lol. I saw the title and thought of my username. haha.
But yeah, it was lyrical, not so deep as your other poetry, but I still liked it a lot.

Post 3 by blbobby (Ooo you're gona like this!) on Friday, 23-Feb-2007 15:34:59

I agree, it's nice. Thanks.

Bob

Post 4 by Amethyst Moon (I can't call it a day til I enter the zone BBS) on Friday, 23-Feb-2007 15:55:59

That would make a great song if you could think of other verses and such for it. If not, it's still a wonderful poem!